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first challenge for my improvement tumblr [link]
realistic Lucy, eyes are a bit too big, more like semi-realism, still this is what came out of it.

I'm very new to realism so any tips or critiques are welcome <3
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Ok its good in impact at first look however her head is a bit small for the size of the body the pose of the body is different for the pose to work and flow better the lower and upper back need to correspond with each other it looks close but the back seems too short and make upper and lower backs non- corresponding with each other making it a bit longer may fix that but not too much or you;ll have it out of proportion with the rest of the body the face is great for anime as for realism its the eyes that make it fail with you have already stated lack of detail in the arms,chest area looks like they blend in to each other and neck needs some work making it look cut off the lower half of the body is not bad your shading is good but the shading is lost in the back because the back line is bold and dose not blend into the back use shading to define the back line would help but all in all its not bad its a fair first run at attempting realism of a severed body I for see great work in the future you have great vision and skill as you learn new and better techniques you'll be able to easily do pieces like this with very little flaws and in every piece we do there will be little flaws that we as the artist only ever notice so keep up the good work keep trying new things
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:iconjinxx-the-ripper:
Jinxx-the-Ripper Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Looks cute, she kinda looks ghostly with the coloring (=
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Gokai-Chibi Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013   Digital Artist
that actually fits a bit
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Gamerbro014 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Fantastic job, Su! :D
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Gokai-Chibi Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013   Digital Artist
thanks
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Gamerbro014 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yw :)
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Little-Wolf-x3 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
A tip: A humans eyes are and eye away from each other what I mean is if you where to get and eye and put it inbeetween the two other eyes it would fit perfectly ;w; I hope that helped.
Tip: When i draw sometimes I put where the light is coming from so I can see where it needs to be shaded and where it needs to have light marks. ;w;
I hope this helped its very good Realism all the same! ;w;
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Gokai-Chibi Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013   Digital Artist
yea to be honest I wasn't giving much mind to lighting, so thats my bad.
Also I knew the eye thing and i guess I spaced it off herp derp.
Thank you for the critique
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Little-Wolf-x3 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Your welcome ;w; im glad I could help
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LegionaireB Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You did a fantastic job, Gokai. Lucy looks fantastic!
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Gokai-Chibi Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013   Digital Artist
glad ya think so <3
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